When first looked at learning outcome One of the E portfolio project, I decided to include my free and final draft of my first prompt because that was the best writing I did. The first draft that i did, wasn’t very good but the final was great. When I got thinking about the Learning Outcome, I feel that it’s much clearer to me and I understand it more. The organization and content are more understandable. The free draft that I write is not the final draft i have learned because as I work, I want everything to be clear and easier to understand. My first draft I didn’t get any quotes into and the draft did not have a conclusion for thesis. I wasn’t sure what to agree with or argue about. When I attended class ENG 110 i started to understand how to write a strong essay with supporting quotes for the argument. ENG 110 helped me to be a stronger writer. Peer review also helped me to find my mistakes in my first draft and also to change the mistakes in my final draft.
