Attempting to combine art with mathematics and science is an unnecessary and futile thought. These two subject issues live on two totally different planes and may not be together. This root system has gone for many years and it has been successful. Schools will still offer better quality education and educate creative minds without integrating …
Monthly Archives: October 2019
Blog # 15
TREAC Paragraph: Art is very important and might impact many elements of education. it is able to make someone use creativity to resolve a hassle. you can marvel how, however art is a creative device we use that we are able to extend our thoughts on. Lehrer concurs with this, and thinks that arthasa excellent effect on science. He argues that “technology wishes the humanities. We need to locate a place for the art in the experimental process” (Lehrer). He sees the want for art, because of the enhancement it makes to science. Barclay Paragraph: Some might also trust that some human beings can be artists or scientists. Both …
Blog # 14
I feel I’m starting to get better at annotations and and I’m progressing well. There are a few areas I might need touchup but otherwise find my work to be good. It was first published on the WorldPost, an online blog site, during the month of January in 2014, by Yo-Yo Ma, a cellist and songwriter. We as …
Blog # 13
Do you see any relation in the use of words? I noticed that I reused words like “I agree,” “That,” “They,” “I Think and This,” I assume the person reading my essay knows who or what I’m speaking about. I also realized that in body paragraphs, if I’m talking about a certain topic, I use that …
Blog # 12
In this paper I am trying to improve on my introduction paragraph. This is by putting in the right amount of information without overloading while still making a clear statement about where I stand on the topic. In my revisions I hope to fix all of my grammatical issues, I also plan to add in …
Peer Review # 2
In the essay there are not a lot of changes that need to be done. The only problems that I see with the essay are many small grammatical issues. You did a good job transitioning the paragraphs for each topic. I would just try to say what you will be talking about in the introduction …
Blog # 11
In her article “Life Stories” Julie Beck argues that the stories of our lives are what create our personalities. She says that when we think about our lives people think about it as a narrative. These stories that we make are what create our personality according to her. She brings up that doing this is neither …
Blog # 10
When I read the “Life Stories” by Back’s the first time I understand a lot of it and I loved it and I did agree with it. But there were things I did not get in my first reading after we talked about it in class and when I read it again, I understand the …
Blog # 9
After reading “I am not a Story” by Galen Strawson I did not liked his essay because I feel he is making fun of people that they write stories of their life. I do disagree with his essay. Because when I read it does not make sense and everyone how is going to read it not …
