In my third Essay of the Art and Science “Gun Control And Leading Factors” the first draft I did not used quotes from the essays we read in class and my draft was not that good and the reader won’t like it if they see it, because there was nothing to support my argument. And when I look back at my draft I decided to include quotes from “Yo Yo Ma” and explain the quotes and what they mean and how they support my argument. Every time we read a sources in class I try to find quotes to help me with my essay and to make my argument stronger and the reader to like my writing. I always try to choose the right quote in to my paper. One of the quotes I used from “Yo Yo Ma” I explained what his quote about and how it will help my paper.
I be mindful charges that I have read, and write about them in my essays due to the fact they have a tendency to spark my ideas about what to write about. To use sources in the paper is always going to make the essay stronger and more beloved to people
