Do you see any relation in the use of words? I noticed that I reused words like “I agree,” “That,” “They,” “I Think and This,” I assume the person reading my essay knows who or what I’m speaking about. I also realized that in body paragraphs, if I’m talking about a certain topic, I use that word a quit often. I’m really good at writing and know exactly what to say.
Do you use certain devices more than others? I think transitions are good devices because it’s easier to comprehend what the writer is talking about I noticed that I use transition words and key terms that I’m used to in my writing.
Are there passages that are hard to follow? if so, can you make them simpler to read by using any of the other devices talked about in this chapter? The reuse of words that I use are things I’ve already talked about through my entire essay, just talked about in a different way. In this chapter, it said try to find synonyms of the word you want to repeat. This helps a lot with your essay because it will make the story pull together smoother and have a much better flow.
Self-knowledge is powerful! Keep up the good work!