Do you see any relation in the use of words? I noticed that I reused words like “I agree,” “That,” “They,” “I Think and This,” I assume the person reading my essay knows who or what I’m speaking about. I also realized that in body paragraphs, if I’m talking about a certain topic, I use that …
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Blog # 12
In this paper I am trying to improve on my introduction paragraph. This is by putting in the right amount of information without overloading while still making a clear statement about where I stand on the topic. In my revisions I hope to fix all of my grammatical issues, I also plan to add in …
Peer Review # 2
In the essay there are not a lot of changes that need to be done. The only problems that I see with the essay are many small grammatical issues. You did a good job transitioning the paragraphs for each topic. I would just try to say what you will be talking about in the introduction …
Blog # 11
In her article “Life Stories” Julie Beck argues that the stories of our lives are what create our personalities. She says that when we think about our lives people think about it as a narrative. These stories that we make are what create our personality according to her. She brings up that doing this is neither …
Blog # 10
When I read the “Life Stories” by Back’s the first time I understand a lot of it and I loved it and I did agree with it. But there were things I did not get in my first reading after we talked about it in class and when I read it again, I understand the …
Blog # 9
After reading “I am not a Story” by Galen Strawson I did not liked his essay because I feel he is making fun of people that they write stories of their life. I do disagree with his essay. Because when I read it does not make sense and everyone how is going to read it not …
Blog # 8
Read “Life’s Stories” by Julie Beck As always, please post 3-5 legible pages of your annotations. (Make ’em count!) Blog #8: (200-300 words) Julie Beck covers a lot of ground as she explores narrative’s potentially powerful influence on our lives. Identify at least three notable assertions or other moments in Beck’s text that caused you to sit …
Blog # 7
Are your words correctly spelled and punctuated? I remember my spelling was big thing in my essay and I lawyers had trouble with my spelling. But spelling become the important thing in my essay I read my essay ever time so I can know where I have wrong spelling. that’s helped me a lot. When …
Blog 6
Name: Ali Al Beadhany Class: English 110 C Date: 9-22-19 First Draft Comparisons I think that the way that I wrote my paper’s drafts are very similar to how Anne Lamott describes the writing process of her first drafts. Lamont said that when she starts writing her first drafts is it only her fingers moving. …
Blog 5
Metaphors are important in the English Language. We use them on a daily basis. In Khullar’s essay he said “We have to be careful how we use Metaphors” because they might hurt people’s feelings. Metaphors represent the kind of poetic words which relates to texts or reflections this imply things distinct from their actual explanation. Metaphors have been studied …
